Oh do I love this. Hades was one of my favorite gods in the series, and I love what you did with him here. The way you presented his changing relationship with Percy was really great.

"Percy Jackson, even when you're doing something that pleases me, you manage to be tiresome. Do you realize you're forcing me to reevaluate my whole opinion of you? It's really very irritating."

I love this line so much! It has so much of Hades's dryness and his heart all wrapped up into one.